The only things that strikes me:

The placement of the blush and neck indents make her have an older face (like grandma old) throwing off the figure of the girl herself. The body looks fine.

The other thing is that Japanese style drawing need to have depth in the lines. They're never all one size. I know I'm being hypocritical about this, but it would have been better if you didn't use regular lines. You could have fattened them up atleast in the proper areas. (chin, hair, clothes, where shadows would touch, ect.) I can't say I do much better myself, but I try when using flash. Anyway, that's what makes it "anime" or "manga". It gives depth.

Anyway, it looks nice overall. Just needs depth and correct use of that other stuffs I said.

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Eee cute!!! I can tell you used Flash. XD

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OMGZ YAY XD it took me like 5 hours T~T

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haha. xD yeeppppp.

YUUUSSSSS. thats less criticism than i would normally get!! ;DDD

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haha. xD yeeppppp.

Just wanted to give my input

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Lol *Tacklehug.*

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But I LIKE pronouncing my words!

Wooh I suck so it looks fine to me & yeah when I first saw it, it did look like a grandma =o

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arrgh. am i the only one that doesnt notice that? O.o

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haha. xD yeeppppp.

OMG! o.o *dies*

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haha. xD yeeppppp.